Post by Candy Redwood on Nov 8, 2009 11:28:29 GMT -5
Extracts from a Harry Potter Fanfiction i'm writing.. (Note: these extracts aren't always going to be in order XD I haven't sorted chapters out just yet)
Summary: Faye Redwood, a 17 year old werewolf who is good friends with the golden Trio travels back in time to the Marauder's era. She faces love triangles, new friendships and new dangers.. Will she able to get back or is she stuck there forever?
The Introduction
Lily gave a brief annoyed sigh and pointed to each one of the Marauders in turn.
"That's James Potter" She told me, a small smile pulling at the corners of her lips. She pointed at him and I immediately understood why everyone said Harry looked liked his father.. He and James were practically identical. He flashed me a friendly grin and I grinned back, feeling totally at ease.
"Sirius Black" Lily continued as the boy in question took my hand and kissed it.
I felt my cheeks start to burn and I fought back a small giggle, feeling sickened with myself.. this was Harry's godfather for Pete's sake!
"Charmed" I said calmly, pulling my hand out of his. Sirius looked momentarily disappointed but soon regained his cheerful expression. I was shocked at how different he was in this time.. He seemed so much more...alive. It saddened me that I knew what he would eventually end up as.
Lily was smirking at my dismissal of Sirius. "Peter Pettigrew" she said, nodding her head at said boy.
My temper flared suddenly and I wanted nothing more than to jump on the rat and beat him to death but I pulled my lips into a friendly smile, not trusting myself to speak.
"And finally.." Lily said, sounding relived. "Remus Lupin."
I turned to look at him and immediately found soft Amber colored eyes staring into my boring chocolate ones.
A soft blush crept up my neck and onto my cheeks as he stared at me intensely. I felt...strange. Not uncomfortable but.. I felt as though he could see through me...see into my soul.
"H..Hello" I managed to choke out.
Suddenly he smiled and my heart did a strange backflip.
"Hello Faye"
Summary: Faye Redwood, a 17 year old werewolf who is good friends with the golden Trio travels back in time to the Marauder's era. She faces love triangles, new friendships and new dangers.. Will she able to get back or is she stuck there forever?
The Introduction
Lily gave a brief annoyed sigh and pointed to each one of the Marauders in turn.
"That's James Potter" She told me, a small smile pulling at the corners of her lips. She pointed at him and I immediately understood why everyone said Harry looked liked his father.. He and James were practically identical. He flashed me a friendly grin and I grinned back, feeling totally at ease.
"Sirius Black" Lily continued as the boy in question took my hand and kissed it.
I felt my cheeks start to burn and I fought back a small giggle, feeling sickened with myself.. this was Harry's godfather for Pete's sake!
"Charmed" I said calmly, pulling my hand out of his. Sirius looked momentarily disappointed but soon regained his cheerful expression. I was shocked at how different he was in this time.. He seemed so much more...alive. It saddened me that I knew what he would eventually end up as.
Lily was smirking at my dismissal of Sirius. "Peter Pettigrew" she said, nodding her head at said boy.
My temper flared suddenly and I wanted nothing more than to jump on the rat and beat him to death but I pulled my lips into a friendly smile, not trusting myself to speak.
"And finally.." Lily said, sounding relived. "Remus Lupin."
I turned to look at him and immediately found soft Amber colored eyes staring into my boring chocolate ones.
A soft blush crept up my neck and onto my cheeks as he stared at me intensely. I felt...strange. Not uncomfortable but.. I felt as though he could see through me...see into my soul.
"H..Hello" I managed to choke out.
Suddenly he smiled and my heart did a strange backflip.
"Hello Faye"